Showing posts with label The American Immigrant. Show all posts
Showing posts with label The American Immigrant. Show all posts

Wednesday, June 15, 2016

Chile. June 2017. It’s happening.


Thanks everyone for coming out on Sunday a couple weekends ago for BBQ! It means a lot to share good food and drinks to mark my 5th year anniversary away from the USA. Definitely had a great time with you all!

So a lot of you might have known that I’ve been making plans to go to South America for some time. But this is the first time I'm announcing a hard date.

Chile is finally going to happen exactly one year from now.

Saturday, June 14, 2014

The American Immigrant: Philippines

 

Last year, American student loan debt for the first time in history exceeded $1 trillion dollars, becoming the number one form of financial liability in the USA. Young people who were promised the same standard of living as their parents now find themselves jobless in an economy that doesn’t want to pay a living wage. Many are choosing to move back with parents and are delaying marriage and owning property. Others are abandoning their country altogether. The American Immigrant: Philippines is part one of a graphic memoir trilogy that follows myself, Erik Thurman, as I work as a young migrant teacher traveling the world in search for solutions to this growing unaffordability and inaccessibility of public education.

With work scarce in the US, I travel to Southeast Asia to be reunited with my Filipina fiancée of three years, while being pressured by our in-laws towards a quick marriage. In order to stay within the Philippines and have my visa supported, I take on an unpaid internship working at a rural high school.

  
Somewhat disgruntled by my former education and bitter that I'm not working in a field that I studied for, I find the work as a teacher to be overbearing, to say the least. As I settle into my new Philippine life, I begin to uncover many parallels between Filipino and American public schools and experience where both systems are failing. And amid growing trouble with my relationship at home and my work at school, I find the struggles of my students to be not unlike mine, and rediscover a love for education that I thought was all but lost.



The American Immigrant: Philippines, already nominated for the Reportager Award, merges the hard journalism from Joe Sacco’s Palestine with Marjane Satrapi’s autobiographical Persepolis in order to tell the struggles our young generation faces around the globe to inspire positive change in education. Join me in this adventure that spans worlds, as I bring you a tale of romance and adversity that will kindle a passion for our public school systems. The book hopes to find a global release in the near future, so stay tuned for updates as they come. 



Sunday, May 18, 2014

How I'm Building a Career with an Agent


So um… you know that whole plan on giving updates regularly about the querying process for an agent? Yeah, that’s not going to be necessary. A few days ago, I was officially offered representation by Ella Kennen of the Corviserio Literary Agency, and I couldn’t ask for a better agent going into the next step of the process, submissions to publishers.

I wish I had a really long inspiring story to share about the process that went into querying, that I preserved by going to writer’s conferences for years, used professional services and critique centers to sharpen my query to a razor point, that I hit low moments where I stuffed my face full of cookie dough ice cream while watching Game of Thrones, but sadly I don’t. I spent three years writing the best manuscript that I could, then I sat down and wrote the best query I could for that manuscript, and I sent it out. That’s it, nothing more.

My final total success rate went something like this: 

24 rejections, 4 partial requests, 1 full manuscript request, and 1 offer.
 
I don’t want to make this post about the process of how I got my agent, as if an agent is some prize you find out of the bottom of a Cracker Jack box that you can wag around to your friends and say “Hey, I’m a writer!” Instead, I want to talk about how I found an ally whom I’m excited to share a career with.

Before I started sending out my batch of queries, I began with a "wishlist" of what I was seeking most for in an agent, beyond just representing my genre. The usual suspects were a given (needed to be a good agent, part of a good reputable agency, good sales, and so on), but I was also seeking qualities and experiences in a person’s life beyond their resume. This would be someone I would be working with for decades, an entire career even, so I wanted someone who would be passionate about all the issues that I wanted to address in my future work. So I sat down and drafted the qualities my dream agent would have, and here’s the list I came up with before my agent search. I wanted…

  • Someone who's worked as a teacher, who has a deep love and appreciation for education.
  • Someone who's traveled often, who understands that the world is much bigger than their own country's borders.
  • Someone who's lived in a foreign country, who knows the challenges it presents to do even the simplest of things like paying bills or taking public transportation.
  • Someone who speaks more than one language, who knows the frustration of what it's like to be in a culture where you might not understand what's being said.
  • Someone who's a strong editor, who isn't afraid to do what it takes to revise a manuscript to make sure it's ready for submission.
  • Someone who's progressive, who feels deeply about women, minority, LGBTQ, and human rights.
  • Finally, someone who I can get along with easily, who doesn't feel like it's an inconvenience for me to ask them about any concerns that I have.

I'm pleased to say that the agent I finally signed with, Ella Kennen, had every single one of those qualities on that wishlist, and more.

I think what I learned most about the querying process is to choose the agent that is going to fall in love with your manuscript. Choose the agent who writes back the very next day after your query and asks for the full. Pick the one who then reads through that full manuscript in two days and then comes back ready to start revisions. Who then proceeds to stay up until 2AM and gets only five hours of sleep, because she/he is excited to polish that manuscript with as much passion as you put into writing it in the first place. Because this is going to be your leading advocate who’s going to put your work in front of an editor and tell them, “You’re going to buy this book.”

It’s been three years since I left the US to start researching and writing The American Immigrant, and while the road to the publication is nearing the end for this book, there’s one more major push to clear. In the next few weeks, we’ll be finalizing our submission packet and collecting information on various editors of some of the largest publishing houses in the world. After that, we submit, we wait, and we hope that the book arrives out on bookstore shelves soon, so that readers can learn what they can do to reclaim and preserve our education system. 

Cheers Ella, let’s go get ourselves a book deal!

Tuesday, April 15, 2014

The Long Road of Querying

Roxas Avenue, the University of the Philippines Diliman.

The last three years of working on The American Immigrant have been an amazing ride. During that time, I've had the pleasure of traveling to six different countries, teach over 1,500 students, and gain some working proficiency in two different languages. All that came to a crescendo back in February, where I traveled back to the Philippines for two weeks to conduct several interviews to fortify my research on the situation of education there. With consultation and support from current and former members of the Philippine Center for Investigative Journalism, E-Net Philippines, the Kabataan (Youth) Party List, the Department of Education (DepEd), the Technical Education and Skills Development Authority (TESDA), the Commission of Higher Education (CHED), and the University of the Philippines, it's finally time to traverse the long road to find a publisher.

At this point, it's advised that I look for a literary agent that can try to shop my work to various publishing houses so that it can find its way to print. In order to get a literary agent, one simply has to craft the most beautiful single page of their lives, the query letter, and mail that out to the overflowing slushpiles of various literary agencies that represent your genre. Countless hours are spent stalking agency websites, twitter accounts, and interviews, in order to woo that perfect agent who feels just as passionate as your work as yourself. Think of it like dating, except they typically take only 15% when a contract is signed vs. +50% when you settle on a real marriage. Nikki Smith's resource on literary agents open to graphic novel queries has been invaluable on this front, and I highly recommend it for any aspiring graphic novelist looking to publish their work.

During the next few months, I'll be listing updates on the hunt to grab the right agent for The American Immigrant: Philippines, so keep an eye out! Already halfway done with the initial outline for the second book of the series, The American Immigrant: South Korea, and I'm already excited to dig into thumbnailing it.

In other news, The Cartoon Picayune now has Issue #5 of their anthology up on Comixology! In addition to my comic Seoul Grind, check out the works of Josh Kramer, Andy Warner, and Emi Gennis in this issue. Cheers!

Wednesday, January 22, 2014

The Art for The American Immigrant is Finished!

It's been about a week since I posted any updates here on the blog, but finally I have great news on the graphic novel that I've been working on for the past 2 1/2 years...

The art is done.

This doesn't mean by a long shot that I'm finished with the whole book, there's still plenty to do until it's time to publish it. I still have about 20 more pages to finish up the lettering on a second pass, beta-readers are taking care of feedback for a 3rd pass through the whole book. Beyond that, I'm hiring a professional editor soon to copy-edit and fact check the entire manuscript before sending it off to agents. And that's not the only thing that's going into this book...

Coming up during February, I'm going to the Philippines for 10 days in order to do a detailed account of the state of education within the country to put into the graphic novel. I'm hoping to inject about 30 pages of prose into the back of this book, though still working out the contents of what I'll include at this time. I'll be traveling to Manila, Pampanga, and Bulacan during my stay, so let me know if you're in those areas!

Expect more frequent updates to this site and new material, 2014 is going to be a big year.


Thursday, May 2, 2013

Two New Comics in June, Update on The American Immigrant


Summer is finally rolling in and with that comes the usual round of comic cons and venues to get your illustrated fix. This year is actually my first time showing in any convention, let alone two, so it's going to be an exciting time. Unfortunately I won't be able to come in person to these events because I'm in the middle of the semester teaching in South Korea, so instead you'll have to check out these publishers I'm working with and strike up some good conversation with them. Coming up this June expect these two comics to debut over in the good ol' US of A

Date              Location                           Venue                                              Publication                                       Publisher

5/31-6/2      Denver, CO         Denver Comic Convention                Uncanny Adventures Anthology           8th Wonder Press

6/15-6/16    Chicago, IL         CAKE EXPO Chicago                     The Cartoon Picayune #5: Hard Work              Josh Kramer

Also of important note, headway is being made on my graphic novel The American Immigrant, currently about 2/3rds of the way through the artwork for the entire book! Expect the interior pages to be finished by Christmas of this year and the first book to be slanted for a 2014 release. Still looking for a publisher for this bad boy, so if you have anyone in mind please send me an email and I'll go check them out. Also aiming to head to the Philippines around the end of the year so that I can include around 30 pages of prose journalism for the back of the book. The plan is to interview several people who work in education and government in order to supplement the main story, or so I hope.

Finally, I've now updated the "Comics" tab over there on the left to include two translations of my comics into Korean. Hoping to have more translations up in the future though. 나의 한국 친구들, 여기를 보세요! http://erikthurmanblog.blogspot.kr/p/comics.html

Thursday, January 3, 2013

My Comic Process



Throughout the time that I’ve been doing non-fiction comics, I’ve been asked quite a bit by writers, artists, editors, and a slew of other people about how I go from first sketches to finished product. It’s a very good question, mostly because when people think comics, they think that the medium is only able to tell fictional stories about superheroes and sorts.

People also have this idea that if you do tackle real events in the medium, that they are typically fall into the category of “political cartoons” and that the only type of storytelling is through satire. Perceptions also arise that because they are cartoons that they will appear as very quick sketches with no amount of detailed rendering at all. Well today I hope to try to answer some of these questions with somewhat of a brief tutorial on my process work.

This tutorial aims to do three things:
1.       Make it easier for future editors of primarily prose publications who have never worked with a comic artist before to familiarize themselves with a rough guideline of what to expect.

2.       To serve as a guide for beginning to advanced comic artists that are interested in experimenting with non-fiction/journalistic comics.

3.       To help writers who are interested in presenting their work in comics and providing suggestions and tools in order to allow them to do so.

As far as my process goes, I try to break it down into 3 major sections, with 8 minor categories. This is just a rough guideline that I’ve found to work most effectively for me in comics, but keep in mind could change depending on the person. It also effectively keep a project organized and I’m able to tell an editor exactly how far I am on a project at any given time.
Pretty simple to follow, yet essential when working with more than one person.

The following is a more detailed breakdown of the process of my comic making, hope you enjoy!

Writing                                                                                                    


-Research


Because my work is primarily creative non-fiction/journalism, a great deal of research goes into my comics before I even put pen to paper. This research can be a number of things: conversations with local people, taking photos of the surroundings, and interviews with professionals in a variety of fields.

I always tend to keep three tools on me at all times: a small pocket notebook, a camera, and a voice recorder.

Low tech and fits in your pocket. Not pictured is the point-n'-shoot camera I use.

I also take the advice from one of my writing professors back in university who would always say “Always keep a journal, because someday that journal might keep you.” In addition to this I’m an avid journal writer and typically write about a page a day about the events that happened in order to come back later when I do my novel work. Sometimes it’s the mundane things that you write about in journals that you’ll find more important later on that can really flesh out a story and add color to a scene. 

San Gabriel Road, Macabebe Pampanga. I used to walk
 this road back home almost everyday.
Also I try to be very involved in the subject that I’m writing about. For instance in the novel that I’m working on right now, it requires me to travel and live in three foreign countries and work in a field that I never went to school before or have had any real previous experience in. I have to not only learn how to teach, but I had to learn how to teach well. Remember all those papers that you used to have to write in high school about topics that didn’t really apply to you? Well, write what you know. And if you don’t know a subject, become involved with it so that you can understand it more. If you’re writing about baseball, maybe get on a field and actually learn how to play the game instead of making up information. 

Finally, people always ask me why I typically don’t draw on location. My main reason is that when I’m doing research, I need to be engaging in my subject matter rather than be a spectator. This means that I need to actively be talking to people and gaining their story, as this is where the camera comes in handy. I can get 100 reference shots of different door designs, local dress, the tiling that is used in someone’s home, the complexity of telephone wires in an area, all around the same time that it would take me to do a drawing. While everyone works differently, I feel that the drawing part happens when I get back to the drawing table, not in the field.

-Draft

Example of a script from page 24 of The American Immigrant
After all the initial research is talked about and recorded, I typically sit down and start writing a first draft in prose. The first part all I’m concerned about is dropping in important arcs of the overall story, doing straight writing without a concern for how any particular panel will look like. I go through and mark my reference where I have it that’s most relevant; along with how many pages I estimate a current story or chapter to be (subject to change, of course.)
After the first draft is finished, I go back and revise, starting to cut up my work and create breakdowns for each page. I keep in mind to try to left important breakdowns to end on the right page in order to create larger moments of closure on each page flip.

As I near the end of the writing, I go through and have this “1st draft” and script reviewed to make sure that it flows well. Once everything checks out at this point, we move onto the drawing…
 
 
 

Artwork                                                                                                  


-Thumbnails


Naw, not the ones attached to your hands, the sketch ones. My process for thumbnails has probably evolved the most over time than any other aspect of the art stage, originally from chicken scratches with pen on printer paper to now decent line and value studies in Photoshop aimed at around 10 x 15 inches. This is because I print my thumbnails out to the art size that I want to draw at, favoring a light table to make a transfer onto a clean piece of Bristol to complete my pencils faster and more detailed than without the transfer.

I also tend to make my thumbnails more detailed than a lot of comic artists, taking the time to make sure that everything visually flows and is set up at this stage before moving on. After completing my thumbnails I usually switch to another comic or artwork to let my thumbnails sit so I can go back and edit later. An extra hour spent on my thumbnails to fix corrections typically save me about 4 hours later down the road.
I’m also ok with breaking away from my draft a bit in order to get better flow and composition, but I’m always very careful to try to get exactly what I want at this point.


 

-Pencils


Done with planning, now onto the real drawing stage of a comic. At this stage I’m using my reference very liberally in order to pull things from my previous research to accurately describe real people that exist in the real world. This is where having a ton of photo reference helps as I should have a fairly sizable library at this point to draw from. I think overall my pencils tend to be a little less tight than a lot of other professional comic artists, but this is mostly because I’m also inking the work myself and I can work with these pencils as my guideline for this. At this point characters and environments are more fleshed out, textures are noted, and designs are pushed out a little more.
I also work at a larger size (11x17 or about A3 size on pre-lined bristol) in order to get in all the detailed work that I want that I might not be able to do at the target print size. This also helps eliminate any small shakes of the hand or other small errors that might be apparently if I was to draw target scale. The tools I use are pretty simple, just a mechanical pencil and a couple of H regular pencils with a kneaded eraser.

 
 

 

-Inks


Probably the most time consuming parts of my comics, because of the amount of rendering that I do with my inking. Using the same process as my penciling, I set up my light box to ink on another clean piece of Bristol board on top of my pencils. I used to be a crow quill and bottle ink guy (swore by the Hunt 102 nib) but as time passed and I found myself having to move often with my art supplies, I found pigment liners to suffice just as well. I’ve also moved away from spotting my fill blacks with a brush and just drop in my deep blacks with a black marker. Any mistakes I draw back into the page with normal correction fluid. People have asked if I’ve used a ruler for most of my work and honestly, I only use a T-square to lay in panel borders and such; I’ve mostly relied on drawing with my arm and locking my shoulder to get straight freehand lines. It takes practice but it’s very doable.
At this point I’m trying to put a tight final finish on my pages, making them essentially what I want them to look like if I was to print them exactly how they are at the time.





 

-Letters

Now to bring everything back into the digital world! I go through and scan my inks in at 300 dpi and set up the files to target print size (6.625 x 10.25 inches) and create separate layers for the lettering. The font sets that I use in my comics are actually based on my handwriting that I built previously and scanned in later, as to try to get a handwritten font that closely resembles my drawing work. Besides that I also freehand my borders and bubbles for my comics to give it that sort of journal feel to it too. Since I often work in foreign language (I speak multiple languages but I’m only a native speaker in English) I often mark anything that appears in non-English with a <………….> to come back later with a trusted translator.

I also choose to do lettering digitally over traditionally for one main reason, for fact checking and edits later that I may have missed. This is where you see essentially the “2nd draft” of the comic emerge. Peer reviews are done and everything is caught up at this point, and finally…
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

Editing                                                                                                       


-Edits


This is where I get back with my editor and beta-readers in order to hash out problems with the dialogue and fact checking. This is where I aim to get a complete and final 3rd draft of the comic and prepare it to actually make it out to readers. I try to make sure that all my research is grounded with at least two sources for any major issue or quote, and this is where my translators come in and help to edit and make sure that my poor foreign language skills are touched up. Because most of the comic has been guided through every step of the way to this point, there isn’t much to do and not much is really changed at this point, but still extremely important.

This part takes wayyyyy too long...
 

-Post Production


Finally onto the last leg of the process. Once I’ve built the comics in photoshop and have everything compressed, I then bring the files into Adobe Indesign and prepare them into a nice handy .pdf for clients. Even though it seems like a simple process, if done wrong you can completely destroy the comic when it is to be printed (speaking from prior experience). I make sure that I have plenty of conversation with the editor at this point to make completely sure that the file is exactly as what they want it to be. Mission accomplished.
 

Conclusion


I hope that this sort of tutorial helps people that are interested in producing and publishing creative non-fiction and journalist comics. It is a medium that has slowly been gaining traction as of lately and I deeply hope that it changes the minds and opinions of people who perceive comics as some sort of joke for the funny pages. If this tutorial helps you at all or you have further questions please let me know, and if this helps you in producing any comics like this be sure to post a link in the comments section as I’d love to read your work. Anyways good luck, fighting!


Friday, November 9, 2012

Elections are over...



Still alive here and been meaning to update lately, so here's a little teaser from a recent page. Pampanga, I miss you.

Thursday, October 4, 2012

The American Immigrant update

Hi everyone just giving my bi-monthly post up on the blog to give everyone an idea where I'm at and what I'm doing. Below is the inks of page 16 from my graphic novel that I'm working on The American Immigrant. I'm sure I have a few followers here that can guess where I'm going to in this page ;).
 



Saturday, September 8, 2012

The American Immigrant Pencil Previews

Hey everyone, finally got a scanner! Meaning I can finally post a few things showing what I'm working on lately. Below are a few excerpts from the book "The American Immigrant." They're pulled about midway through the first part of the Philippines book, and illustrate a little bit about the area that I traveled to during the summer of 2011 in the Pampanga province. Hope that you enjoy!

 
Chapter 6: San Juan's Blessing
Page 45 and 46
Chapter 7: Sanctuary
Page 59, 60, and 61

Wednesday, August 8, 2012

Going to Malaysia, out of work soon, comic exercise

Plans are all set and I'll be traveling abroad again for the first time in year, this time out to Malaysia for a little bit of journalism work and partially for vacation (first time ever?!). Hope to actually produce a comic coming up for a publisher in the next few weeks, so going to keep things under wraps until I can provide more information about that. But I promise this story is going to be a good one!

As far as an update on life, my contract with Taereung High School in East Seoul is coming to an end in two weeks and I still haven't found a job here in Korea. Things might be a bit tricky and I might have to take time off from the bigger book that I'm working on to tend to life problems. I know I keep talking about this "American Immigrant" novel and yet not showing that I'm producing any work for it, but trust me I'm almost already up to 50 pages penciled on it so far and I'm going to be inking in the near future.

Last thing is that I do want to show some art that I had originally did in university, got halfway done on, and gave up. Been sitting on my external hard drive for almost 1 1/2 years and I just took the rest of a day to sit down and finish it off. It feels so good to paint again after pencilling for months. So here it is, pulled from a small prompt I got out of Scott McCloud's "Understanding Comics" trilogy (a must read for all visual artists, not just comic artists). Goal was to tell an ambiguous story about a cop, a crook, and a third person and be a bit more complex and subtle at the same time in the storytelling. Figured to add another challenge by rendering the whole thing digitally. Originally had the story called "French 25," but looking back I'm not too crazy about the name, either way here it is...